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9th-Oct-2008 12:58 am
Horikitty
Title: Atlas Will Not Shrug
Genre: General
Rating: PG
Length: Drabble for [info]shineeworld  challenge 04: We All Fall Down
Pairing: Onew | Key
Author's Note: I honestly dislike calling Onew by his real name. It doesn't roll off my tongue right and Jinki sounds like a baby name. Onew is nyu baby. But for fiction's sake, I'll try to call him by his moniker. 



There’s that grimace again

It shears through his façade; a grin and a chuckle. But his hand cradles his hip and when Key squints past the glint of hot spotlights, he sees the fingers tremble. 

The songs play on, the screams fade out and all he knows is the pounding of his heart and the sweat on his brow. Backstage, Key finds him leaning against the wall, catching his breath. 

“Jinki,” his voice temporizes and cautiously stands beside him. “Does it hurt much?”

There’s that chuckle again, forced between the panting and Jinki pivots to look at the solemn countenance. “Does what hurt?” 

He all but yelps when a hand flashes to touch his flank and jumps away as if singed.

“Don’t, Key.” The name reminds them of who they are and what they play. 

“.....I’m just tired.”

Fool, Key inwardly sighs as he watches Onew depart. You’re just human.

Comments 
9th-Oct-2008 08:02 pm (UTC)
OMG. Will read late bb <3
10th-Oct-2008 01:42 am (UTC)
lol okie dokie, fluffies. =]
11th-Oct-2008 01:59 am (UTC)
homg that was beautiful bb ♥
9th-Oct-2008 11:13 pm (UTC)
Aw~
Just like Onew to hide his pain and just laugh about it ;___;

I love this~♥
10th-Oct-2008 01:43 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.And for loving it. ^_^
9th-Oct-2008 11:20 pm (UTC)
Oh, Onew. ;_; He tries too hard to be a good leader, poor boy. ♥
10th-Oct-2008 01:43 am (UTC)
Exactly! He tries too hard....but it's inspirational as it is sad, yeah?

Thanks for the comment. ^_^
11th-Oct-2008 08:32 am (UTC)
Your choice of words were so pretty they killed me ;_; ♥
11th-Oct-2008 10:22 pm (UTC)
*revives you!* ;-; I don't like killing people....

^-^ But thank you! XD
12th-Oct-2008 02:42 am (UTC)
This was wonderful. Onew the stubborn selfless leader. :(
12th-Oct-2008 07:30 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much nyappy =]

Your comments fill me with glee.
13th-Oct-2008 02:34 am (UTC)
You're very welcome~!

Yayyy! (: <3
26th-Oct-2008 09:02 pm (UTC)
Poor Onew. ;_;
Very beautifully written, I loved it.♥
MEMMING ~
15th-Jan-2009 08:59 pm (UTC)
Super late reply but thank you! Gasp! I cannot believe you are memming. =DDD

Thank you, thank you, thank you.

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